Very thrilling! Well done for completing your exciting story at home.
Ibrahim 3j really good story Methushan but a little bit of mistakes i love the names of the ninjas! 🙂 🙂 🙂
this is a excellent story
wow very good
A you good story about ninjas ,you have tried to vary your sentence structure and used powerful words. Just check your spellings: Metal, Steal, Arrived.
This was a very exciting story>
very good
I must agree to Ibrahim but overall the story was fantastic. Keep on writing. Adeeba 5B
Ibrahim 4c Are you talking about ninja masters of spinjitzu? :):):):):):):):):):)
cool story
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Very thrilling! Well done for completing your exciting story at home.
Ibrahim 3j really good story Methushan but a little bit of mistakes i love the names of the ninjas! 🙂 🙂 🙂
this is a excellent story
wow very good
A you good story about ninjas ,you have tried to vary your sentence structure and used powerful words. Just check your spellings: Metal, Steal, Arrived.
This was a very exciting story>
very good
I must agree to Ibrahim but overall the story was fantastic. Keep on writing. Adeeba 5B
Ibrahim 4c Are you talking about ninja masters of spinjitzu? :):):):):):):):):):)
cool story