Well Don Dylan I like the adjectives you have used. You now need to start using a range of punctuation.
Your work is really good.
I think you can use more ajective.
I think you can use more adjectives.
I think you need to work on some capital letters because a I has a capital letter and I like your story, and you will need to check on your work more on punctuation. – Karolina 5B Gearies Junior School
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Well Don Dylan I like the adjectives you have used. You now need to start using a range of punctuation.
Your work is really good.
I think you can use more ajective.
I think you can use more adjectives.
I think you need to work on some capital letters because a I has a capital letter and I like your story, and you will need to check on your work more on punctuation. – Karolina 5B Gearies Junior School