Wow ! What a scary ending Gharish, I love the way you included a cliff-hanger at the end and thoughts to draw me in.
Remember to check your punctuation before you publish.
Miss A
I definitely agree with Miss, fantastic effort, it really drew me in. Nice comparison with pushing the stone that was heavier than a bulldozer. Keep it up!
great work gharish I love the ending and all the vocb you put in there ! WELL DONE ! you are get your tenses !
Hey Gharish
I really like your intro for your story
Make sure you cheek your work
You have not used the prompt.
Somran
Great work Gharish
There is a lot of action in your story
There are a few places where there could be commas.
Wow ! What a scary ending Gharish, I love the way you included a cliff-hanger at the end and thoughts to draw me in.
Remember to check your punctuation before you publish.
Miss A
I definitely agree with Miss, fantastic effort, it really drew me in. Nice comparison with pushing the stone that was heavier than a bulldozer. Keep it up!