Hi Romasa,
What an excellent piece of writing! You use so many specific, vivid action words that really bring the story to life and make it play like a movie in the mid of the reader:
Suddenly the door slamed open, he was here. He slowly aprouched his chair, when he finally reached his chair and sat down and bashed his nobbely nuckels onto the table,
For help with spelling on a website, you might try an app called Ginger. My students use the free version.
Keep us the great work!
Ms. Rainey
from sunny California
Hi Romasa,
What an excellent piece of writing! You use so many specific, vivid action words that really bring the story to life and make it play like a movie in the mid of the reader:
Suddenly the door slamed open, he was here. He slowly aprouched his chair, when he finally reached his chair and sat down and bashed his nobbely nuckels onto the table,
For help with spelling on a website, you might try an app called Ginger. My students use the free version.
Keep us the great work!
Ms. Rainey
from sunny California