I really liked your work it was an amazing poem.
It was very good to read. You used your punctuation in the right place and it made a lot of sense, I hope you are pleased with yourself because that was a wonderful piece of work that everyone will enjoy.
“Hillarious!” I would roar.Great story,though check capital letters.
I like this writing.
Thats what I do when theres no more cornflakes.
From Adam Mead Primary School.
I really liked your work it was an amazing poem.
It was very good to read. You used your punctuation in the right place and it made a lot of sense, I hope you are pleased with yourself because that was a wonderful piece of work that everyone will enjoy.
from Jessica Hakeem
Mead Primary School Yr6
Wow that is a good paragraph! Your punctuation adds good effect as it is all in the correct place.
Well done!
Keep up the good work!
From Ruby, Mead Primary School, Year 6