I am pleased that you haven’t tried to write the whole story but just the introduction, it shows a thoughtful approach to your writing as you have had to ensure you end in the best place for the reader without them knowing too much.
Wow! What a great story, Alima! I love the way you started the story by setting the busy scene. It must have been difficult! I particularly like the way you said “She cackled a blood-thirsty laugh, then left” I’m still a little spine chilled at how awful the fairy seemed. Keep up the good work,
~Imani~
This is a great story Alima and you created a great atmosphere by describing the new baby that is going to arrive in the family, well done it was FABULOUS!
From Annais
Hi Alima
I am pleased that you haven’t tried to write the whole story but just the introduction, it shows a thoughtful approach to your writing as you have had to ensure you end in the best place for the reader without them knowing too much.
Miss T team 100wc
Wow! What a great story, Alima! I love the way you started the story by setting the busy scene. It must have been difficult! I particularly like the way you said “She cackled a blood-thirsty laugh, then left” I’m still a little spine chilled at how awful the fairy seemed. Keep up the good work,
~Imani~
Thanks for the lovley comment!!
Thanks for the lovely comment!! <3
Alima, I love the describing words you used and how they got ready for a new person in the family!
-Téa-
This is a great story Alima and you created a great atmosphere by describing the new baby that is going to arrive in the family, well done it was FABULOUS!
From Annais