Max and the money tree

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3 Responses to Max and the money tree

  1. Abby Lacey says:

    Hi Uddii
    I like your spin on Jack & the Beanstalk. Just watch your grammar and missing small words – it would be better for it to all make sense and cut out a little bit of the story, than miss out words just to be exactly 100 words.
    Thanks
    Abby, Team100WC, Reading, UK

  2. wrigl says:

    I can’t realy read it so make in better

  3. ahmez1 says:

    well done good work

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