Irina, thank you for taking part in this week’s 100 Word Challenge. How exciting for all of you to have a new baby princess! I enjoyed your twisted fairy tale. How ingenious to have frozen beans that made a big hole instead of a tall beanstalk. Using a chicken instead of a cow makes it sensible to get only two frozen beans. Remember that using different lengths of sentences can add to your story. May I suggest that your last sentence may work better as short sentences? I’m curious how you chose to find a saber-tooth tiger. How did they become friends? Did he free the tiger or feed it? Your story left me wanting to know more. Good job!
Irina, thank you for taking part in this week’s 100 Word Challenge. How exciting for all of you to have a new baby princess! I enjoyed your twisted fairy tale. How ingenious to have frozen beans that made a big hole instead of a tall beanstalk. Using a chicken instead of a cow makes it sensible to get only two frozen beans. Remember that using different lengths of sentences can add to your story. May I suggest that your last sentence may work better as short sentences? I’m curious how you chose to find a saber-tooth tiger. How did they become friends? Did he free the tiger or feed it? Your story left me wanting to know more. Good job!