I like your alternative version of the fairytale ‘Puss in Boots’. You have used some excellent vocabulary, Abhinav; this made it more interesting to read. I’m also pleased with the wide variety of punctuation used such as the semi-colon, which some children find difficult to use.
I like your alternative version of the fairytale ‘Puss in Boots’. You have used some excellent vocabulary, Abhinav; this made it more interesting to read. I’m also pleased with the wide variety of punctuation used such as the semi-colon, which some children find difficult to use.
I liked the suspense at the start and all the different sides of the lion especially how it was against the robbers