Nayan, I enjoyed your take on the classic Jack and the Beanstalk. Make sure that you are really changing something about the story to make it different then the original, although there were minor details the story was pretty much the same. I like that you capitalized BIG to make it really stand out and pop in your writing. Also, don’t forget to edit your work before publishing – this will make it even more enjoyable for the reader!
Nayan, I enjoyed your take on the classic Jack and the Beanstalk. Make sure that you are really changing something about the story to make it different then the original, although there were minor details the story was pretty much the same. I like that you capitalized BIG to make it really stand out and pop in your writing. Also, don’t forget to edit your work before publishing – this will make it even more enjoyable for the reader!
This is a great story and a great twist.
By,
Abhinav 😀