Some great description here – especially if the forest in the first line, and I love the idea of the transformation from real person into LEGO.
Do you need more speech marks in the last line? If he’s talking to the bird, then I think that you do. What do you think?
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Some great description here – especially if the forest in the first line, and I love the idea of the transformation from real person into LEGO.
Do you need more speech marks in the last line? If he’s talking to the bird, then I think that you do. What do you think?