Hamzah some real elements of humour here but you need to watch your pronouns as I got a little confused
Hamzah I really like the uniqueness of the subject that you have chosen to write about.next time be a little careful and make sure that your writing flows. Mrs K
I can`t see do a little bit bigger
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Hamzah some real elements of humour here but you need to watch your pronouns as I got a little confused
Hamzah I really like the uniqueness of the subject that you have chosen to write about.next time be a little careful and make sure that your writing flows.
Mrs K
I can`t see do a little bit bigger