Amazing writing Alex! Such an interesting way to use the prompt. You had me so engaged with your careful word choice and made me feel so sad for the character. Excellent writing! I’m so proud of you.
Alex this is fabulous! I really like the way you used precise detail and ordinary objects to create a mood in your writing. Your use of the narrator voice really drew me in. I really enjoyed reading this and can’t wait to read more. Excellent job!
Miss A
Amazing writing Alex! Such an interesting way to use the prompt. You had me so engaged with your careful word choice and made me feel so sad for the character. Excellent writing! I’m so proud of you.
Alex this is fabulous! I really like the way you used precise detail and ordinary objects to create a mood in your writing. Your use of the narrator voice really drew me in. I really enjoyed reading this and can’t wait to read more. Excellent job!
Miss A
Good use of short sentences Alex. This set the scene and created the mood …left me feeling a little sad.
Mrs K