Hi Surabhi, what a fantastic story. I loved reading through and found the ending really very exciting. Well done on great use of punctuation and upper case, these all really added emphasis. Well done, great work 🙂
Surabhi this is a fantastic response to this week’s prompt, though I can’t see the words in here. I loved the way you made careful word choice to create a modd for your reader.
Keep this up
Miss A
Hi Surabhi, what a fantastic story. I loved reading through and found the ending really very exciting. Well done on great use of punctuation and upper case, these all really added emphasis. Well done, great work 🙂
Surabhi this is a fantastic response to this week’s prompt, though I can’t see the words in here. I loved the way you made careful word choice to create a modd for your reader.
Keep this up
Miss A
Well done Surabhi, lovely word choices that keeps the reader interested.
Mrs K
do a bit more writing