Brilliant Kerem! I love the way you used detail to make me feel empathy for your hero and to help make him interesting to your reader. Remember to check for missing commas when you pause. Mrs M
Ok Thx miss
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Brilliant Kerem! I love the way you used detail to make me feel empathy for your hero and to help make him interesting to your reader. Remember to check for missing commas when you pause.
Mrs M
Ok Thx miss