I really enjoyed reading your script, you have great imagination when creating stories and write with great expression and deliver the story well (it is also very entertaining).
Hi Gia,
This was really enjoyable read, you used well structured detail to make me really care about and understand your character. Watch for missing commas. I can’t wait to find out more!
Mrs M
Wow Gia that’s amazing I really like the ending
thanks Zahra I really like yours too.
thanks zahra.
thank you zahra
thank you Zahra, I am just a tad confused since, jinan doesn’t and you do!
I like how you used lots of description
thanks
The description was amazing! I like how you used the phrase “Even though Lucy sounds like a soft name, it is really not”
maybe end it a different way.
thanks that is really good feedback, Ill end it differently next time
I like your discription
thank you amelie i really liked your description too
I like how you described your character
from joanna
thank you joanna. i thought of her very hardly
I really enjoyed reading your script, you have great imagination when creating stories and write with great expression and deliver the story well (it is also very entertaining).
Well done Gia x
Daddy x
thank you very much daddy i did hope that you would of liked it
Hi Gia,
This was really enjoyable read, you used well structured detail to make me really care about and understand your character. Watch for missing commas. I can’t wait to find out more!
Mrs M
thank you very much mrs moore, i will watch my commas with my next peice of writing
I liked the first sentence ‘even though lucy sounds like a soft name it really isn’t’