This was a really great introduction to your hero ,with great detail to influence your reader’s opinion. Think about using different sentence starters. Mrs M
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Zaynab, I really liked how you described your character. next time you can use more similies and maby some metephores
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This was a really great introduction to your hero ,with great detail to influence your reader’s opinion.
Think about using different sentence starters.
Mrs M
ok
Zaynab, I really liked how you described your character. next time you can use more similies and maby some metephores