>Good description >Good sentence structures <Bad grammar
From the writer of the famous 'Vankandhu'
Zia
Nice description about his powers(star) Slash had very good weapons(star) Improve your grammar(wish)
you gave Slash great elemental powers and made his father Thor. You could add some more description.
Well done Aman, you included lots of great mythological detail to help me understand your character, who sounds very exciting! Next time read it back and add in punctuation when you pause. Keep it up! Mrs M
great job Aman 😀 I think you should make it a bit longer 🙂 Iva And thanks for reading my story!!!
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>Good description
>Good sentence structures
<Bad grammar
From the writer of the famous 'Vankandhu'
Zia
Nice description about his powers(star)
Slash had very good weapons(star)
Improve your grammar(wish)
you gave Slash great elemental powers and made his father Thor. You could add some more description.
Well done Aman, you included lots of great mythological detail to help me understand your character, who sounds very exciting! Next time read it back and add in punctuation when you pause.
Keep it up!
Mrs M
great job Aman 😀
I think you should make it a bit longer 🙂
Iva
And thanks for reading my story!!!