I like you description !! maybe you can say about the parents.
thank you ok I will try and write about the parents by joanna
Joanna this is a great piece of writing; you give your reader lots of interesting background detail about Ella that makes me want to know more about her. Next time remember to check that all your verbs are in the past. Keep it up. Mrs M
I like how you described the princess and the lay out
thank you Mrs Moore by Joanna
Hi Joanna , i love your description
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I like you description !!
maybe you can say about the parents.
thank you ok I will try and write about the parents
by joanna
Joanna this is a great piece of writing; you give your reader lots of interesting background detail about Ella that makes me want to know more about her. Next time remember to check that all your verbs are in the past.
Keep it up.
Mrs M
I like how you described the princess and the lay out
thank you Mrs Moore
by Joanna
Hi Joanna , i love your description
xx