Swifter by Smpriti2

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6 Responses to Swifter by Smpriti2

  1. gibsj says:

    That is really good I liked how you described your character
    Look at pontoon
    From joanna

  2. plahp says:

    You described her really well! Next time check ‘Continues’ It has a capital In the middle of the sentence.

  3. hossr says:

    Great description and adjectives

  4. nanand says:

    Wow! What a lot of amazing detail to draw me into your exciting heroine! I want to know more about her! Next time think about changing your sentence starters.
    Well done Sampriti

  5. tharo says:

    That is really good. I like the way you described your character. Great adjective. From – Olimaran

  6. virda says:

    Very descriptive I like the way you described her

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