the loud storm

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2 Responses to the loud storm

  1. plahp says:

    I really enjoyed reading this! How about next time saying how she is a goddess. Otherwise its really good!

  2. nanand says:

    Maleeha you started this off really well, including lots of amazing detail about Storm, your heroine and incorporated mythological elements. Your last sentence could do with editing; remember to use an apostrophe to show possession.
    Can’t wait to read more!
    Mrs M

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