Maleeha you started this off really well, including lots of amazing detail about Storm, your heroine and incorporated mythological elements. Your last sentence could do with editing; remember to use an apostrophe to show possession.
Can’t wait to read more!
Mrs M
I really enjoyed reading this! How about next time saying how she is a goddess. Otherwise its really good!
Maleeha you started this off really well, including lots of amazing detail about Storm, your heroine and incorporated mythological elements. Your last sentence could do with editing; remember to use an apostrophe to show possession.
Can’t wait to read more!
Mrs M