I can really imagine what Skyla looks like, but next time why don’t you tell me a bit more about her super power in more description! But otherwise it is really good and I really enjoyed reading it!
Fab Roha! You really use detail well to help your reader understand your character. Remember to edit for mistakes. Mrs M
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I can really imagine what Skyla looks like, but next time why don’t you tell me a bit more about her super power in more description! But otherwise it is really good and I really enjoyed reading it!
Fab Roha! You really use detail well to help your reader understand your character.
Remember to edit for mistakes.
Mrs M