Sneak

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8 Responses to Sneak

  1. dhang says:

    I really like your story Jinan. Maby next time use a bit more similies and metephores

  2. ranaz1 says:

    its really good jinan next time add in more full stops

  3. shaiz says:

    I like how your story was connected to other myths.
    To improve you could say more how she looks like.

  4. asarm says:

    Jinan this is very descriptive I can really imagine your charter well done maybe you can put in some more similes

  5. nanand says:

    Well done Jinan, you gave us great background detail to help your reader understand your character.
    Try to vary the way you start your sentences.
    Mrs M

  6. chowj says:

    😀

  7. balea says:

    I liked how you used my character

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