wow that is actually really good
Nice description Watch your spellings and who is “Dragon”
wow that is good maybe you could add ore description of how shadow looks or how ariel looks
Great stuff Jervarne, you use fab detail to tell your reader all about your character and who he is. I enjoyed reading this. Next time try varying your sentence starters Mrs M
I like the powers you gave to your character because its not just one power
I like the powers you gave to your character because its not just one power plus there all really cool
Good but you need to put more commas in 🙂
iva <3
Great description, but who’s Dragon?
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wow that is actually really good
Nice description
Watch your spellings and who is “Dragon”
wow that is good maybe you could add ore description of how shadow looks or how ariel looks
Great stuff Jervarne, you use fab detail to tell your reader all about your character and who he is. I enjoyed reading this. Next time try varying your sentence starters
Mrs M
I like the powers you gave to your character because its not just one power
I like the powers you gave to your character because its not just one power plus there all really cool
Good but you need to put more commas in 🙂
iva <3
Great description, but who’s Dragon?