Shadow by jervarne not arojan

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8 Responses to Shadow by jervarne not arojan

  1. dhang says:

    wow that is actually really good

  2. tavah says:

    Nice description
    Watch your spellings and who is “Dragon”

  3. alir says:

    wow that is good maybe you could add ore description of how shadow looks or how ariel looks

  4. nanand says:

    Great stuff Jervarne, you use fab detail to tell your reader all about your character and who he is. I enjoyed reading this. Next time try varying your sentence starters
    Mrs M

  5. mushk says:

    I like the powers you gave to your character because its not just one power

  6. mushk says:

    I like the powers you gave to your character because its not just one power plus there all really cool

  7. eremi says:

    Good but you need to put more commas in 🙂

    iva <3

  8. hossr says:

    Great description, but who’s Dragon?

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