I think the question is good the wonder is good
thank you
it has a lot of description and its really good over all
I really like the vary of adjectives and sentence starters
Good description and vocabulary. Maybe make it a little less of a story
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I think the question is good
the wonder is good
thank you
it has a lot of description and its really good over all
I really like the vary of adjectives and sentence starters
Good description and vocabulary. Maybe make it a little less of a story