Fastbleidon

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5 Responses to Fastbleidon

  1. dousj says:

    I think the question is good
    the wonder is good

  2. charm says:

    it has a lot of description and its really good over all

  3. mushk says:

    I really like the vary of adjectives and sentence starters

  4. hossr says:

    Good description and vocabulary. Maybe make it a little less of a story

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