Leon this is great! You included lots of detail to give your reader background information about your hero that makes you care about what happens next and hints about what happens next; this is something talented writers do!
Next time check your punctuation before you publish.
Keep it up!
Mrs M
tremendous powers to communicate to reptiles
Leon this is great! You included lots of detail to give your reader background information about your hero that makes you care about what happens next and hints about what happens next; this is something talented writers do!
Next time check your punctuation before you publish.
Keep it up!
Mrs M