Brilliant Iva! You used lots of details to show how your story fits in with other myths and told us things about your character by the way she did things. Next time try to use shorter sentences so your work is clearer.
Well done, I really enjoyed reading this!
Mrs M
hope u enjoy my story! 😉
iva
I like how your story is linked with other myths.
To improve you could write less.
thanks Zaynab!
Brilliant Iva! You used lots of details to show how your story fits in with other myths and told us things about your character by the way she did things. Next time try to use shorter sentences so your work is clearer.
Well done, I really enjoyed reading this!
Mrs M
thanks miss:|
sorry about the face:(
iva can you put it in paragraphs please