Great job Pavan! You included lots of detail about your mythological heroine that make me care about her and want to know what happens next. Remember to check that all your verbs are in the correct tense before you publish.
Keep up the great work, I feel like I have just read the work of a talented writer!
Mrs M
Wow ! Fantastic use of description. You have come along way with your writing, really enjoyed reading your story and would love to know what happens next?
I love your descripiton
cool pavan! I lik ehow you described alex very precicely
Great job Pavan! You included lots of detail about your mythological heroine that make me care about her and want to know what happens next. Remember to check that all your verbs are in the correct tense before you publish.
Keep up the great work, I feel like I have just read the work of a talented writer!
Mrs M
Thank you miss!
hi pavan love how you described alex
Wow ! Fantastic use of description. You have come along way with your writing, really enjoyed reading your story and would love to know what happens next?
Mum