I like how you included my character since they were siblings (I did too) anyway I really like the description, just maybe add more punctuation
maby you should put abit more description rakeen from iva
Nice description(star) Good use of powers(star) Check for missing commas(wish)
very good vocab rakeen, describe more of the actions
Great stuff Rakeen! You used lots of interesting detail to draw me into your character description of your mythological hero. Next time think about varying sentence starters. Can’t wait to find out what happens next. Mrs M
I liked how you used my character
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I like how you included my character since they were siblings (I did too) anyway I really like the description, just maybe add more punctuation
maby you should put abit more description rakeen from iva
Nice description(star)
Good use of powers(star)
Check for missing commas(wish)
very good vocab rakeen, describe more of the actions
Great stuff Rakeen! You used lots of interesting detail to draw me into your character description of your mythological hero. Next time think about varying sentence starters.
Can’t wait to find out what happens next.
Mrs M
I liked how you used my character