Hi Kayshap,
This is a great introduction to your mythological hero; I really love your use of language and the way he could even hear ‘the cry of a tree when it is chopped down’. Next time think about using different sentence starters.
I can’t wait to find out what happens next.
Mrs M
Amazing description and powers
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Hi Kayshap,
This is a great introduction to your mythological hero; I really love your use of language and the way he could even hear ‘the cry of a tree when it is chopped down’. Next time think about using different sentence starters.
I can’t wait to find out what happens next.
Mrs M