I like how you used your similes well look at spellings from joanna
I like your story about Jasmin. To improve you could fix some of the spellings.
I will see if I can improve my spellings. ok.
that is amazing! to make it better you can go over the spellings
Well done Amelie, you use detail to place your heroine in a mythological world and make me care about what happens to her. Next time remember to check through it before you publish. Looking forward to what happens next. Mrs M
Thank you Mrs M for you comment for my work and I will tell you what happens next!!!
I love your ideas! Next time check spelling!
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I like how you used your similes well
look at spellings
from joanna
I like your story about Jasmin.
To improve you could fix some of the spellings.
I will see if I can improve my spellings.
ok.
that is amazing! to make it better you can go over the spellings
Well done Amelie, you use detail to place your heroine in a mythological world and make me care about what happens to her. Next time remember to check through it before you publish.
Looking forward to what happens next.
Mrs M
Thank you Mrs M for you comment for my work and I will tell you
what happens next!!!
I love your ideas! Next time check spelling!