safaa im not lying but I want to read it 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 times or even 1000000000000000,0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 that’s how obsessed with it maby but abit more description in it lova iva<3 <3 <3
What a detailed piece of writing… I felt a chill just by reading it! To progress your writing even further you could add in a few exciting sentence starters.
Safaa this was a great way to introduce your mythological heroine to your readers, you used detail well to create a firm impression in your reader’s mind. Next time try to vary your sentence starters and structures.
Can’t wait to find out what happens next.
Mrs M
safaa im not lying but I want to read it 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 times or even 1000000000000000,0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 that’s how obsessed with it maby but abit more description in it lova iva<3 <3 <3
I like the idea safaa, why don’t you add more adjectives instead of ice.
I think you should not use ice or icy too much.
Hi Safaa
What a detailed piece of writing… I felt a chill just by reading it! To progress your writing even further you could add in a few exciting sentence starters.
Looking forward to reading more!
Miss Kaur
Safaa this was a great way to introduce your mythological heroine to your readers, you used detail well to create a firm impression in your reader’s mind. Next time try to vary your sentence starters and structures.
Can’t wait to find out what happens next.
Mrs M
Thank you for the comment guys
safaa I like the way you have used your charter well it really is good