KHALISAH!!!!!!!! that is awesome. I don’t know what else to say. I like the description of her appearance. maybe next time describe more of her personality
A very descriptive piece of writing! I could really imagine what Heather looks like. Don’t forget to check over your punctuation as some of your sentences need editing.
Khalisah you used lots of detail to describe your mythological heroine and gave us information that told us more about her, this is something that a talented writer would do! Next time try varying your sentence starters.
Keep it up
Mrs M
KHALISAH!!!!!!!! that is awesome. I don’t know what else to say. I like the description of her appearance. maybe next time describe more of her personality
Hi Khalisah
A very descriptive piece of writing! I could really imagine what Heather looks like. Don’t forget to check over your punctuation as some of your sentences need editing.
Keep it up.
Miss Kaur
Khalisah you used lots of detail to describe your mythological heroine and gave us information that told us more about her, this is something that a talented writer would do! Next time try varying your sentence starters.
Keep it up
Mrs M
A great start…I especially enjoyed your first sentence. It really got my attention!
HI KHALISAH LOVE YOUR DESCRIPTION I COULD REALY IMAGINE WHAT SHE LOOKED LIKE
ROHA