Well done Rehana, I really enjoyed reading this. I liked the way you explained her powers so clearly and gave us extra information to feel empathy for your mythological heroine. Next time remember to check all your verbs are in the correct tense before your publish.
Mrs M
Nice work, Rehana. I really like your description. Maybe make it smaller?
Its good because it has a lot of description
Well done Rehana, I really enjoyed reading this. I liked the way you explained her powers so clearly and gave us extra information to feel empathy for your mythological heroine. Next time remember to check all your verbs are in the correct tense before your publish.
Mrs M
Really good description and adjectives
this is very descriptive I can really image your charter well done.
Thank you for the comments and honesty and I will include those next time 🙂
you used your description very well
WOW GREAT WORK IT’S VERY INTERESTING BUT… IT’S 2ND PLACE EVEN THOUGH IT’S NAMED AFTER ME!!!!!!