Oh wow Rehana! What a ferocious demon you have created, you included some interesting detail to draw me in and your careful word choice has made it clear to your reader just how bad he really is. Next time try to vary your sentence starters and check your punctuation before you publish.
I can’t wait to find out what happens next.
Mrs M
Oh wow Rehana! What a ferocious demon you have created, you included some interesting detail to draw me in and your careful word choice has made it clear to your reader just how bad he really is. Next time try to vary your sentence starters and check your punctuation before you publish.
I can’t wait to find out what happens next.
Mrs M
I found this very scary. I’m interested to know why your demon targets mammals over other animals. Fabulous imagery.