Well done Khalisah, you created a scary character with some fearsome super powers. Next time remember to think about how you could make this character more fitting for a myth.
Well done
Mrs M
What a great description Khalisah! I felt a chill whilst reading this. Maybe when you write the next part you could use different adjectives to describe ‘Icy Ella’. Looking forward to reading more.
Well done Khalisah, you created a scary character with some fearsome super powers. Next time remember to think about how you could make this character more fitting for a myth.
Well done
Mrs M
Thank you for creating this character. I wonder why someone who can run so fast would wait so patiently behind the people she wants to hurt?
What a great description Khalisah! I felt a chill whilst reading this. Maybe when you write the next part you could use different adjectives to describe ‘Icy Ella’. Looking forward to reading more.
Miss Kaur