:)=I like the way you made your own Mythological and Historical world and made it sound real. :)=I like the question at the end who makes everyone think Wish=Punctuation
Written by Junior
STAR: YOU USED REALLY GOOD DESCRIPTIVE WRITING WITH GOOD PUNCTUATION You used a lot of mythical language like decades etc.
Wish: Maybe use different word than supreme ( even though it’s a good word)
That is amazing jevarne I like how you used suspense at the end to improve maybe use more adjectives
I love the description
Maybe add a comma so I can take a breath
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:)=I like the way you made your own Mythological and Historical world and made it sound real.
:)=I like the question at the end who makes everyone think
Wish=Punctuation
Written by Junior
STAR: YOU USED REALLY GOOD DESCRIPTIVE WRITING WITH GOOD PUNCTUATION
You used a lot of mythical language like decades etc.
Wish: Maybe use different word than supreme ( even though it’s a good word)
That is amazing jevarne I like how you used suspense at the end to improve maybe use more adjectives
I love the description
Maybe add a comma so I can take a breath