Great! I can’t wait, ’til you finish the story! The way you ended it was very descriptive. Maybe, a bit more info? but I don’t really know. ;D
I really enjoyed your writing can’t wait to find out what happens next 🙂 😀 😉 😮
HI Safaa, This is great I love the way you used thoughts and description to draw me into your story. I really want to know what happens next! Try vary sentence starters Mrs M
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Great! I can’t wait, ’til you finish the story! The way you ended it was very descriptive. Maybe, a bit more info? but I don’t really know. ;D
I really enjoyed your writing can’t wait to find out what happens next 🙂 😀 😉 😮
HI Safaa,
This is great I love the way you used thoughts and description to draw me into your story. I really want to know what happens next!
Try vary sentence starters
Mrs M