Hi Jinan,
A great way to move the story on. I like the way that you used little details about your heroines actions to imply things about her character and questions to introduce the idea that something was about to change.
Remember we don’t write as we talk, so think about the ellipsis
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
Hi Jinan,
A great way to move the story on. I like the way that you used little details about your heroines actions to imply things about her character and questions to introduce the idea that something was about to change.
Remember we don’t write as we talk, so think about the ellipsis
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M