Oh wow Pavan ! What a fantastic way to open your mythological tale; I love the way you used figurative language to create such an idyllic setting for your reader. You also included detail that made me care for your heroine. I can see some missing punctuation here, remember to check before you publish.
Can’t wait to read on.
Mrs M
Wow! that was awesome. I loved how you explained the character and how she got her name. Make sure you use little hints to imply things about the villain
Oh wow Pavan ! What a fantastic way to open your mythological tale; I love the way you used figurative language to create such an idyllic setting for your reader. You also included detail that made me care for your heroine. I can see some missing punctuation here, remember to check before you publish.
Can’t wait to read on.
Mrs M
Thank you miss! Next time I will check before I publish for missing punctuation.
*I love your description
* You described her mythological features as well!!
#Just check your punctuation 🙂
Wow! that was awesome. I loved how you explained the character and how she got her name. Make sure you use little hints to imply things about the villain