sandy by gia part 2

8 Responses to sandy by gia part 2

1. ranaz1 says:

   March 14, 2016 at 11:35 am

   *Excellent description
   *I love your punctuation
   🙂

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   • dhang says:

     March 21, 2016 at 7:10 pm

     thank you zahra

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2. alir says:

   March 14, 2016 at 11:49 am

   wow I love your myth you really dragged me in to your story
   cannot wait to read the next part.
   Roha

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   • dhang says:

     March 21, 2016 at 7:27 pm

     Thank you very much roha

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3. Daddy says:

   March 18, 2016 at 8:26 am

   This is a great introduction to your story I can’t wait to read the rest

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   • dhang says:

     March 21, 2016 at 7:28 pm

     Thank you daddy don’t worry it is not the end I still need to show you part3yet

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     • dhang says:

       March 21, 2016 at 7:29 pm

       I mean part 3

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4. Mummy says:

   March 21, 2016 at 7:23 pm

   Wow Gia what an interesting start, love your descriptive writing and such good similes. Well done, can’t wait for Part 3!!
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