Hi Kayshap,
You really continued your story well, signposting clearly that you were introducing the baddy. You also made really good use of language to influence my opinion. As you continue think about how you can use punctuation to influence your reader .
Mrs M
Hi Kayshap,
You really continued your story well, signposting clearly that you were introducing the baddy. You also made really good use of language to influence my opinion. As you continue think about how you can use punctuation to influence your reader .
Mrs M