Hi Pavan
I really like the way you have continued this, including detail so as to explain why the events that will unfold are happening. You have made some grammatical errors, mixing past and present; always make sure you go back and edit your work before you publish.
Can’t wait to read on.
Mrs M
Great punctuation and grammar
Wow pavan that is really amazing I really like how you used lots of description to describe you mythological land
Hi Pavan
I really like the way you have continued this, including detail so as to explain why the events that will unfold are happening. You have made some grammatical errors, mixing past and present; always make sure you go back and edit your work before you publish.
Can’t wait to read on.
Mrs M