Oh my Mia! Imagine that, drowning in your own tears, that certainly sounds like an awful way to go. I am a little confised to who you are talking about in your last sentence; was it Scarlett’s dad or Envy? Using names when you cange the topic to another person will help your reader to follow you more easily.
Can’t wait to read on
Mrs M
Oh my Mia! Imagine that, drowning in your own tears, that certainly sounds like an awful way to go. I am a little confised to who you are talking about in your last sentence; was it Scarlett’s dad or Envy? Using names when you cange the topic to another person will help your reader to follow you more easily.
Can’t wait to read on
Mrs M
Great work I love your descriptive writing