Oh my Suhani! What an epic battle , you made great use of language to influence my opinion. I really enjoyed reading this. Next time remember to edit before you publish as I can see some slight errors. Mrs M
that was amazing to improve you can add some metephores
I really like great effort.
maybe make the writing bigger so I can see your writing on webby.
that was a very ok story but I think you need to change some mistakes
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Oh my Suhani! What an epic battle , you made great use of language to influence my opinion. I really enjoyed reading this.
Next time remember to edit before you publish as I can see some slight errors.
Mrs M
that was amazing to improve you can add some metephores
I really like great effort.
maybe make the writing bigger so I can see your writing on webby.
that was a very ok story but I think you need to change some mistakes