Hi Alisha,
What wonderful use of description, you really made use of all your senses well to draw me into your writing. I especially like the way you used questions to make me think and repetition to build the tension.
I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing.
Mrs M
Hi Alisha,
What wonderful use of description, you really made use of all your senses well to draw me into your writing. I especially like the way you used questions to make me think and repetition to build the tension.
I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing.
Mrs M