Hi there, What a great idea! I love the way you used all your senses in your description. Next time try to use different words for ‘then’ and writing in longer sentences. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
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Hi there,
What a great idea! I love the way you used all your senses in your description. Next time try to use different words for ‘then’ and writing in longer sentences. I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M