Hi there,
What a clever hero you have created in Aboster; I like the way you varied your language to draw me in and structured your writing. Next time don’t include the subheadings, as they are not necessary. It’s great to see you drawing on your experience of texts to come up with ideas but I bet your own ideas are just as good.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M
Hi there,
What a clever hero you have created in Aboster; I like the way you varied your language to draw me in and structured your writing. Next time don’t include the subheadings, as they are not necessary. It’s great to see you drawing on your experience of texts to come up with ideas but I bet your own ideas are just as good.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M