Hafsa this is a wonderful story, you made great use of varied vocabulary to keep me interested and made sure you finished as well you started. Next time remember to add commas when you pause. Mrs M
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Hafsa this is a wonderful story, you made great use of varied vocabulary to keep me interested and made sure you finished as well you started. Next time remember to add commas when you pause.
Mrs M