Hi Aman,
What a wonderful myth, I love the way you used your knowledge of Viking mythology to place your characters in the world of myths and legends. You also used description well to paint a picture in my mind.
Next time remember that you need to be consistent in your tenses and make sure that all of your verbs are in the past.
Hi Aman,
What a wonderful myth, I love the way you used your knowledge of Viking mythology to place your characters in the world of myths and legends. You also used description well to paint a picture in my mind.
Next time remember that you need to be consistent in your tenses and make sure that all of your verbs are in the past.
Mrs M